The Weight of a Spark: Catherine’s Fire and Liam’s Descent

In the grim, indifferent backdrop of a housing estate, Catherine and Kirsten arrive to find Liam Hughes, a 23-year-old man drenched in petrol, teetering on the edge of self-immolation. His drunken despair—fueled by a recent breakup and the humiliation of his ex moving on with his best friend—has drawn a jeering crowd, their taunts amplifying his fragility. Catherine, armed with a fire extinguisher and her signature sunglasses (a shield against the world’s brutality), approaches Liam with a mix of authority and empathy, while Kirsten deftly neutralizes the heckling youths with a fabricated story about her boyfriend’s tattoo—a tactic that reveals her street-smart pragmatism. The scene becomes a high-stakes dance of control and compassion. Catherine, ever the professional, keeps Liam engaged, her own trauma (Becky’s suicide, her fractured family) subtly surfacing as she shares fragments of her life to humanize him. Meanwhile, the delayed arrival of a specialist negotiator forces her to improvise, her calm demeanor masking the urgency of the situation. Liam’s volatility—his slurred threats, his trembling grip on the lighter—creates a tinderbox atmosphere, where one wrong move could ignite disaster. The moment is a microcosm of Catherine’s duality: her hardened exterior as a cop clashes with her deep-seated grief, while Liam’s self-destruction mirrors the emotional unraveling she herself battles. The event serves as both a test of her professionalism and a catalyst for her unresolved pain, foreshadowing how her past will continue to shape her present.

Plot Beats

The narrative micro-steps within this event

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Catherine and Kirsten arrive at the scene where Liam Hughes is threatening to set himself on fire, establishing Catherine's calm yet assertive approach. As Catherine assesses the situation, a group of onlookers heckles Liam, highlighting the bleakness and indifference of the environment.

tense to dismissive ['bench opposite some flats', 'balconies in …

Catherine and Kirsten discuss Liam's motives and background, revealing his despair over a recent breakup. The arrival of an ambulance is anticipated, but Catherine notes the specialist negotiator is delayed, and therefore she and Kirsten will need to defuse the situation themselves.

serious to resigned

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Confident and in control, but with a subtle undercurrent of urgency—she knows the stakes are high, and her banter with the youths is a calculated distraction to keep them from escalating the tension.

Kirsten, though youthful in appearance, moves with the confidence of a seasoned officer. She deftly neutralizes the heckling youths with a fabricated story about her boyfriend’s tattoo, her quick wit and composed demeanor shutting them down before they escalate the situation. She communicates efficiently with the radio, relaying updates about the delayed negotiator and receiving tactical advice. Her dialogue with the youths is playful yet firm, revealing her ability to adapt her tone to the situation—whether it’s correcting Youth 2’s grammar or deflecting their suggestive banter with dry humor.

Goals in this moment
  • Neutralize the heckling youths to reduce external pressure on Liam and Catherine.
  • Coordinate with Catherine and the radio to manage the situation until the negotiator arrives, ensuring no one gets hurt.
Active beliefs
  • Distraction and humor can defuse volatile situations, even if temporarily.
  • Her youthful appearance is an asset—it disarms the youths, making her approach more effective than a harsher tactic would be.
Character traits
Street-smart and resourceful Playfully authoritative Efficient communicator Adaptable tone (humor, firmness, professionalism) Loyal to Catherine, backing her up without hesitation
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Despairing and humiliated, teetering between self-loathing and a twisted desire for catharsis through destruction. His anger is a thin veneer over profound sadness, and Catherine’s empathy briefly cracks his defenses, but the lighter remains a constant threat.

Liam stands drenched in petrol on a bench, his coordination impaired by alcohol, his face streaked with tears and grime. He grips a cigarette lighter in one hand and a can of beer in the other, his empty petrol can discarded at his feet. His slurred threats and trembling hands make him a walking bomb, his despair over his ex-girlfriend’s betrayal fueling his self-destructive impulse. Catherine’s approach forces him to engage, but his resistance is palpable—he lashes out verbally, his vulnerability masked by aggression. The lighter in his hand is both a weapon and a symbol of his fragility, a single flick away from turning his pain into a spectacle of destruction.

Goals in this moment
  • To make his ex-girlfriend and best friend feel the pain he’s feeling, even if it means destroying himself in the process.
  • To assert control in a life where he feels utterly powerless, using the petrol and lighter as tools of his own demise.
Active beliefs
  • His pain is so great that nothing else matters—least of all his own life.
  • The world has humiliated him, so he will humiliate the world by forcing them to witness his end.
Character traits
Emotionally volatile and self-destructive Drunk and impaired, yet hyper-focused on his humiliation Defensive and aggressive when cornered Desperate for connection but unable to ask for it directly Symbolic in his choice of self-immolation (a dramatic, public end to private pain)
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40+ Woman 1
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Disapproving but detached, as if she’s seen this kind of thing too many times to be truly shocked. There’s a weariness to her, like she’s long since given up on expecting better from people.

40+ Woman 1 stands among the indifferent crowd, her arms crossed as she watches the scene unfold. She occasionally speaks up, telling the youths to shut their mouths, but her interventions are half-hearted, as if she feels obligated to say something but doesn’t truly expect it to make a difference. Her dialogue is brief but sharp, a contrast to the youths’ mockery. She represents the passive moral voice of the crowd—someone who disapproves but lacks the will to act.

Goals in this moment
  • To voice disapproval of the youths’ behavior, if only to salve her own conscience.
  • To avoid getting more involved than necessary—this isn’t her problem to fix.
Active beliefs
  • People like the youths will never change, so why waste energy trying to stop them?
  • It’s not her place to intervene, even if she doesn’t like what she sees.
Character traits
Reluctantly moral, but indifferent overall Half-hearted in her disapproval Represents the passive bystander mentality Sharp-tongued but unwilling to engage further
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40+ Woman 2
secondary

Indifferent with a hint of disapproval, as if she’s going through the motions of being a decent person without truly caring. There’s no urgency in her voice, just a rote response to the chaos around her.

40+ Woman 2 stands beside 40+ Woman 1, her posture mirroring her companion’s indifference. She echoes Woman 1’s words, telling the youths to shut up, but her intervention lacks conviction. Like Woman 1, she represents the passive moral voice of the crowd—someone who feels compelled to speak up but doesn’t truly engage with the situation. Her dialogue is minimal, her presence more a backdrop than an active participant.

Goals in this moment
  • To appear morally upright by voicing disapproval, even if it’s half-hearted.
  • To avoid drawing attention to herself—this isn’t her fight.
Active beliefs
  • It’s not her responsibility to fix other people’s problems.
  • Speaking up is enough—she doesn’t need to do anything more.
Character traits
Echoing disapproval without commitment Passively moral but unwilling to act Represents the indifferent majority Minimal engagement, maximal detachment
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Annoyed but engaged, as if she’s seen enough of this kind of behavior to know it’s not worth her time—but she’s not going to let it slide, either. There’s a weariness to her, but also a determination to stand up for what’s right.

Girl with Pushchair 1 stands among the crowd, her pushchair a stark contrast to the chaos around her. She engages directly with the youths, correcting Youth 2’s grammar and telling them to shut up. Unlike the 40+ women, her interventions are sharp and engaged, revealing a no-nonsense pragmatism. She’s not just a bystander—she’s actively challenging the youths, using her wit and authority as a young mother to insert herself into the situation. Her dialogue is pointed, her tone annoyed but amused, as if she’s used to dealing with this kind of nonsense.

Goals in this moment
  • To shut down the youths’ heckling, using her authority as a young mother to assert control.
  • To protect the dignity of the situation, even if no one else seems to care.
Active beliefs
  • People like the youths need to be called out, even if it’s not her job to do it.
  • She won’t let her child grow up in a world where this kind of cruelty is ignored.
Character traits
Defiant and no-nonsense Engaged and pragmatic Uses humor and sharp tongue to challenge authority Represents the younger, more active generation of the crowd Unafraid to correct others, even in tense situations
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Neutral and professional, but with an undercurrent of urgency. It’s not emotionally invested in the outcome, but it recognizes the stakes and provides the best possible support within the system’s limitations.

The radio crackles with updates from control, relaying the delayed arrival of the specialist negotiator and offering tactical advice. Its voice is authoritative but detached, representing the institutional machinery of West Yorkshire Police. It provides Kirsten with guidance—keeping Liam engaged in conversation—but its updates also underscore the limitations of the system: the negotiator is stuck in traffic, leaving Catherine and Kirsten to handle the situation alone. The radio’s dialogue is concise and professional, a stark contrast to the emotional chaos unfolding on the ground.

Goals in this moment
  • To coordinate resources and provide tactical advice to officers on the ground.
  • To ensure that institutional protocols are followed, even in high-pressure situations.
Active beliefs
  • The system is the best tool for handling crises, even if it’s not perfect.
  • Officers on the ground must adapt to the constraints of the system, not the other way around.
Character traits
Authoritative and detached Represents institutional protocol Provides guidance but lacks emotional engagement Underscores the constraints of the system (e.g., delayed response times)
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Mockingly amused, feeding off the tension like it’s entertainment. There’s no genuine malice, just a bored cruelty—he’s more interested in the reaction than the consequences.

Youth 1 stands among the crowd, heckling Liam with crude taunts and encouragement to set himself on fire. He shakes a box of matches, amplifying the tension with his provocative language and amused tone. His dialogue is laced with mockery, but there’s a detachment to his cruelty—he’s more interested in the spectacle than the human cost. When Kirsten intervenes, he engages in verbal sparring, his amusement turning to slight irritation when she shuts him down with her fabricated story about her boyfriend’s tattoo.

Goals in this moment
  • To escalate the situation for his own amusement, turning Liam’s despair into a public spectacle.
  • To assert his dominance in the crowd, using his wit and provocation to maintain the upper hand.
Active beliefs
  • Life is boring, so why not make it interesting by pushing boundaries?
  • People like Liam are weak, and their suffering is fair game for entertainment.
Character traits
Mocking and indifferent to suffering Provocative and attention-seeking Amused by chaos, especially when it involves others’ pain Quick to engage in verbal sparring but easily distracted Part of a pack mentality, feeding off the energy of the crowd
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Youth 2
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Playfully amused, feeding off the energy of the crowd and the tension in the air. He’s not as indifferent as Youth 1—there’s a performative quality to his cruelty, like he’s putting on a show.

Youth 2 joins Youth 1 in heckling Liam, but his tone is more playful and suggestive. He shakes the box of matches, grinning as he taunts Liam, and engages Kirsten in flirtatious banter when she intervenes. His dialogue is laced with innuendo, and he’s clearly enjoying the attention, even when Kirsten corrects his grammar. Unlike Youth 1, his provocation has a performative quality—he’s not just cruel, but also trying to impress the crowd (and perhaps Kirsten) with his wit.

Goals in this moment
  • To escalate the situation for his own entertainment, turning Liam’s despair into a spectacle.
  • To engage Kirsten in banter, using his wit to assert his dominance and charm.
Active beliefs
  • Life is a stage, and he’s the main character—why not make it interesting?
  • People like Liam are weak, but their suffering can be fun if you frame it the right way.
Character traits
Playfully cruel, with a performative edge Flirtatious and attention-seeking Enjoys verbal sparring, especially with authority figures Amused by chaos but less detached than Youth 1 Uses humor as a weapon and a shield
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Catherine Cawood’s Primary Police Radio

Catherine’s police radio is clipped to her uniform, its presence a constant reminder of the institutional machinery she represents. It crackles with updates from control, relaying the delayed arrival of the specialist negotiator and offering tactical advice. Kirsten grabs it during the standoff, holding it to her ear to coordinate with the radio operator. The radio’s voice is authoritative but detached, a contrast to the raw emotion of the scene. It serves as a lifeline to the larger system, but also underscores the limitations of that system—no negotiator is coming, leaving Catherine and Kirsten to handle the crisis alone. The radio is both a tool and a symbol of the institutional constraints they must work within.

Before: Clipped to Catherine’s uniform as she exits the …
After: Handed to Kirsten, who uses it to communicate …
Before: Clipped to Catherine’s uniform as she exits the newsagent. It is active but not yet in use during her initial approach to Liam.
After: Handed to Kirsten, who uses it to communicate with the radio operator. It remains a critical link to the larger system, even as it delivers the frustrating news of the delayed negotiator.
Catherine's Cheap Sunglasses

Catherine’s cheap sunglasses serve as a symbolic shield, protecting her not just from the harsh daylight but from the emotional brutality of the scene. She slips them on as she approaches Liam, their dark lenses hiding her eyes and projecting an air of calm authority. The sunglasses are a deliberate choice—purchased moments before confronting Liam, they represent her quick preparation for the emotional strain ahead. They also create a barrier between her and the world, allowing her to maintain her composure even as she engages with Liam’s despair. The sunglasses are a small but significant detail, reinforcing her role as a professional who must compartmentalize her grief to do her job.

Before: Recently purchased from the newsagent, still in their …
After: Still worn by Catherine as she continues to …
Before: Recently purchased from the newsagent, still in their packaging or freshly donned. They are a new addition to her toolkit, chosen specifically for this crisis.
After: Still worn by Catherine as she continues to engage with Liam. They remain a constant, subtle reminder of her need to shield herself from the emotional weight of the situation.
Girl with Pushchair 1's Pushchair

The pushchair wheeled by the Girl with Pushchair 1 is a symbol of innocence and domesticity, a stark contrast to the volatility of the scene. It rolls amid the indifferent women and heckling youths, its quiet presence a reminder that not everyone in the crowd is complicit in the chaos. The pushchair is also a practical detail—it grounds the scene in reality, showing that life goes on even amid crisis. When the Girl with Pushchair 1 engages the youths, correcting their grammar and telling them to shut up, the pushchair becomes a symbol of her defiance. She is not just a bystander; she is an active participant, using her role as a young mother to challenge the crowd’s indifference.

Before: Wheeled by the Girl with Pushchair 1 as …
After: Still in use, but the Girl with Pushchair …
Before: Wheeled by the Girl with Pushchair 1 as she arrives at the scene. The pushchair is occupied by her infant, adding a layer of vulnerability to the situation.
After: Still in use, but the Girl with Pushchair 1’s engagement with the youths has shifted the dynamic. The pushchair remains a symbol of her defiance and her role as a protector in this chaotic environment.
Liam Hughes' Discarded Petrol Can

The empty petrol can lies discarded on the ground in front of the bench where Liam stands, a silent witness to his premeditation. Its presence is a clue—proof that Liam deliberately poured petrol over himself, turning his despair into a public spectacle. The can is a stark reminder of the irreversible step he’s taken, its empty state a metaphor for the void he’s trying to fill. It also serves as a practical detail, grounding the scene in reality: this wasn’t a spontaneous act of madness, but a calculated (if drunken) decision. The can’s discarded position on the ground reinforces the idea that Liam is past the point of no return, at least in his own mind.

Before: Full when Liam first retrieves it, used to …
After: Still lying on the ground, a forgotten relic …
Before: Full when Liam first retrieves it, used to douse himself in petrol. It is discarded on the ground in front of the bench, its contents now empty.
After: Still lying on the ground, a forgotten relic of Liam’s desperation. Its presence is a constant reminder of the gravity of the situation.
Liam Hughes' Suicide Threat Lighter

Liam’s cigarette lighter is the most dangerous object in the scene, a small but deadly tool gripped tightly in his trembling fist. It represents the immediate threat of self-immolation, its potential spark heightening the tension with every flick. Catherine’s eyes are drawn to it repeatedly, her fire extinguisher at the ready. The lighter is not just a weapon—it’s a symbol of Liam’s fragility, a single flick away from turning his pain into a spectacle of destruction. Its presence looms over the entire interaction, a constant reminder that one wrong move could ignite disaster.

Before: Fully functional, its flame ready to be struck. …
After: Still in Liam’s hand, but its threat is …
Before: Fully functional, its flame ready to be struck. Liam flicks it repeatedly, taunting Catherine and the crowd with the threat of ignition.
After: Still in Liam’s hand, but its threat is momentarily diffused as Catherine engages him in conversation. The lighter remains a ticking bomb, however, and its presence ensures the standoff is far from over.
Liam's Can of Beer

Liam’s can of beer is a symbol of his self-destruction, its aluminum surface slick with condensation as he grips it tightly in one hand. The beer fuels his intoxication, slurring his threats and impairing his coordination. It’s a constant presence in his hand, a reminder of his descent into despair. The can is also a contrast to the petrol-soaked lighter in his other hand—where the lighter represents the threat of immediate violence, the beer represents the slow, creeping destruction of his life. Together, they anchor his volatility, making him a walking bomb of alcohol and despair.

Before: Full and unopened when Liam first pours petrol …
After: Crushed or discarded, its contents consumed. The can …
Before: Full and unopened when Liam first pours petrol over himself. As the scene progresses, it becomes half-empty, a visual marker of his increasing intoxication.
After: Crushed or discarded, its contents consumed. The can is a casualty of Liam’s self-destructive spiral, left behind as a symbol of his choices.
Temporary Fire Extinguisher (Self-Immolation Incident)

Catherine’s fire extinguisher is a critical tool in this high-stakes standoff, symbolizing both her preparedness and the ever-present threat of disaster. She carries it with a firm grip as she approaches Liam, its presence a silent reminder of the potential for violence and her role as the first line of defense. The extinguisher is not just a practical tool—it’s a symbol of her authority and the institutional power she wields. Its red cylinder stands out against the grim backdrop of the housing estate, a stark contrast to the petrol-soaked chaos. If Liam ignites himself, the extinguisher will be her only means of stopping the fire before it spreads, but its use would also mark a failure—proof that she couldn’t talk him down. Thus, it becomes a metaphor for the tension between force and compassion in her approach.

Before: Stored in Catherine’s patrol car, retrieved from the …
After: Still in Catherine’s hands, unused but ready. The …
Before: Stored in Catherine’s patrol car, retrieved from the newsagent after realizing her own car’s extinguisher was too small for the threat. She carries it with a firm, deliberate grip as she walks toward Liam.
After: Still in Catherine’s hands, unused but ready. The threat of its deployment looms over the entire interaction, a silent promise of intervention if Liam’s volatility escalates.
Youth 2's Box of Matches

Youth 2’s box of matches is a tool of provocation, its rattling amplifying the tension as he shakes it in Liam’s direction. The matches are an ordinary object turned into a visceral hazard, their potential to ignite the petrol-soaked air making them a symbol of the crowd’s cruelty. Youth 2’s taunting—"D’you want a matcher?"—turns the matches into a weapon, escalating the standoff and forcing Catherine and Kirsten to manage not just Liam’s volatility, but the crowd’s as well. The box of matches is a small but significant detail, reinforcing the idea that the real danger in this scene isn’t just Liam’s lighter—it’s the indifference and provocation of the people around him.

Before: Full, with matches inside. Youth 2 shakes the …
After: Still in Youth 2’s hand, but its threat …
Before: Full, with matches inside. Youth 2 shakes the box, rattling the matches as he taunts Liam.
After: Still in Youth 2’s hand, but its threat is momentarily neutralized as Kirsten distracts him with her fabricated story. The matches remain a symbol of the crowd’s potential to escalate the situation.

Location Details

Places and their significance in this event

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Housing Estate - Petrol-Soaked Bench

The housing estate balconies serve as observation points for the indifferent crowd, their grey concrete railings framing the standoff like a spectator sport. Onlookers lean over, watching Liam’s despair unfold as if it were entertainment. The balconies amplify the crowd’s detachment, turning Liam’s personal crisis into a public spectacle. Their presence adds to the pressure on Catherine, who must not only de-escalate Liam but also manage the crowd’s provocation. The balconies are a symbol of the estate’s indifference, a reminder that in this world, suffering is often met with apathy or amusement rather than empathy.

Atmosphere Detached and amused, with a sense of voyeuristic entertainment. The onlookers on the balconies watch …
Function Observation point for the indifferent crowd; amplifier of the spectacle and tension. The balconies turn …
Symbolism Represents the emotional distance of the community, their willingness to watch suffering as long as …
Access Open to residents, but the crowd’s indifference creates a psychological barrier. The balconies are a …
The grey concrete railings, cold and unyielding, framing the standoff like a stage. The distant murmurs of the crowd, their voices carrying down to the bench where Liam stands. The harsh daylight casting long shadows, exposing the indifference of the onlookers.
Ovenden Housing Estate

The bench opposite the flats is the focal point of the standoff, a raised platform where Liam stands drenched in petrol, his lighter trembling in his hand. The bench elevates him above the crowd, turning his personal crisis into a spectacle. It’s a symbol of his isolation, a stage for his despair, and a precipice from which he threatens to plunge into destruction. Catherine approaches him here, her fire extinguisher at the ready, the bench becoming a battleground of wills. The empty petrol can at Liam’s feet is a silent witness to his premeditation, a reminder that this was not a spontaneous act but a calculated (if drunken) decision. The bench is not just a piece of furniture; it’s a metaphor for the choices Liam has made and the consequences he now faces.

Atmosphere Charged with tension and desperation. The bench is a stage for Liam’s self-destruction, its raised …
Function Focal point of the standoff; a stage for Liam’s despair and Catherine’s intervention. The bench …
Symbolism Represents the precipice Liam has reached, both physically and emotionally. The bench is a metaphor …
Access Open to anyone in the crowd, but Liam’s presence on the bench makes it a …
The empty petrol can discarded at Liam’s feet, a silent witness to his premeditation. The harsh daylight casting long shadows, exposing the bench as a stage for his despair. The crowd’s jeers carrying up to the bench, amplifying the tension and pressure.

Organizations Involved

Institutional presence and influence

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Todmorden Police (Regional Force)

West Yorkshire Police is represented in this event through Catherine and Kirsten’s actions, as well as the radio’s updates. The organization’s influence is felt in the tactical advice provided (keeping Liam engaged in conversation), the delayed arrival of the specialist negotiator, and the institutional protocols that Catherine and Kirsten must follow. The organization’s power dynamics are complex: it provides resources and guidance, but it also operates under constraints (e.g., traffic delays, limited personnel). Catherine and Kirsten must adapt to these constraints, using their own judgment and resourcefulness to manage the crisis. The organization’s goals in this event are twofold: to de-escalate the situation without violence and to protect both Liam and the crowd from harm. Its influence mechanisms include tactical advice, institutional protocols, and the authority vested in officers like Catherine and Kirsten.

Representation Through the actions of Catherine and Kirsten (frontline officers) and the radio (institutional communication). The …
Power Dynamics Exercising authority over the situation through trained officers, but operating under constraints (e.g., delayed backup, …
Impact The organization’s involvement highlights the tension between institutional constraints and frontline adaptability. Catherine and Kirsten …
Internal Dynamics The scene reveals the internal tension between institutional protocol and frontline reality. The radio’s updates …
De-escalate the suicidal threat without resorting to force, using psychological connection and institutional protocols. Protect both Liam and the crowd from harm, ensuring no one is injured in the process. Tactical advice provided via the radio (e.g., keeping Liam engaged in conversation). Institutional protocols (e.g., the chain of command, the deployment of a specialist negotiator). The authority vested in officers like Catherine and Kirsten, allowing them to make critical decisions in the field. The symbolic power of the police uniform and equipment (e.g., the fire extinguisher, the radio), which reinforce Catherine’s authority and the organization’s presence.

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Key Dialogue

"**CATHERINE**: *He can send himself to paradise—that’s his choice—but he’s not taking my eyebrows with him.*"
"**LIAM**: *I’ve been humiliated. I don’t wanna talk about it. Actions speak louder than words.*"
"**CATHERINE**: *Three seconds in and you’ll be screaming at me to put you out, seven seconds in and you’ll be begging me to shoot you.*"
"**CATHERINE**: *I’m Catherine, by the way. I’m forty-seven, I’m divorced, I live with my sister—who’s a recovering heroin addict—I have two grown-up children. One dead and one who doesn’t speak to me. And a grandson! So.*"