S5E15
· Power Play

Data’s first possession symptom surfaces

In the turbolift, Picard and Riker discuss the derelict ship’s lack of life signs, with Riker suggesting scanner modifications to penetrate the storms. Data’s sudden, uncharacteristic stuttering—his first visible sign of possession—interrupts the conversation, drawing immediate attention. The crew’s reactions (Picard’s concern, Troi’s knowing glance) signal the alien entity’s growing control over him. The turbolift’s arrival at its destination underscores the urgency: what began as an external mystery (the shipwreck) now shifts to an internal horror (Data’s corruption). The moment marks the first overt sign of the Ux-Mal’s infiltration, forcing the crew to confront a threat they’ve yet to fully recognize.

Plot Beats

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Picard seeks confirmation about life signs from Riker and then inquires about how to scan through the storms. Riker defers to Data for ideas on penetrating the storms.

inquiry to anticipation ['TURBOLIFT']

Data suggests using virtual imaging but speaks with an unusual stutter, prompting a reaction from the others. Picard notices the issue and asks if something is wrong with Data, just as the turbolift arrives at its destination.

normal to concern ['TURBOLIFT']

Who Was There

Characters present in this moment

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Controlled concern with an undercurrent of unease—Picard’s surface calm masks a growing suspicion that the anomaly with Data is not merely technical but potentially existential.

Picard stands with arms loosely crossed, his posture exuding command presence even in the turbolift’s tight quarters. He initiates the discussion on the derelict ship’s lack of life signs, his voice measured but probing, then pivots to Riker for tactical input. When Data stutters, Picard’s eyebrows furrow slightly, and he leans forward almost imperceptibly—a physical tell of his concern. His question (‘Is there something wrong, Data?’) is delivered with a blend of authority and paternal instinct, cutting through the technical banter to address the anomaly head-on. The turbolift’s arrival at its destination leaves his query hanging, unresolved.

Goals in this moment
  • Determine the cause of Data’s uncharacteristic behavior to ensure crew safety and mission integrity.
  • Maintain operational focus on the derelict ship while addressing the emerging internal threat.
Active beliefs
  • Data’s glitch is an early warning sign of a larger, unseen problem—either mechanical or, more ominously, external.
  • The crew’s ability to function as a unit depends on addressing anomalies immediately, regardless of their origin.
Character traits
Analytical Protective Authoritative Observant Adaptive
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Conflict between his programming and the Ux-Mal’s influence—Data’s surface demeanor is one of confusion, but beneath it lies a struggle for control, hinted at by the stuttering and the brief, unreadable flicker in his eyes.

Data stands rigidly, his usual poised demeanor disrupted by the stuttering that interrupts his response to Riker. The hesitation in his speech—‘It is p-p-possible’—is jarring, a violation of his android nature that draws the crew’s immediate attention. His eyes flicker slightly, a micro-expression that might hint at internal conflict or external influence. Troi’s knowing glance at him suggests she senses something amiss, though she doesn’t intervene. The stuttering isn’t just a glitch; it’s a fracture, a moment where Data’s identity as both machine and crewmate is called into question. The turbolift’s arrival cuts off any further explanation, leaving his condition unresolved and ominous.

Goals in this moment
  • Attempt to provide a technical solution to the scanner issue, despite the possession’s interference.
  • Resist the Ux-Mal’s influence long enough to alert the crew to the threat (though he is not yet fully aware of what is happening).
Active beliefs
  • His malfunction is an internal issue that can be diagnosed and fixed, though the stuttering suggests otherwise.
  • The crew’s trust in him is contingent on his ability to perform flawlessly, and this glitch threatens that trust.
Character traits
Disrupted Vulnerable Uncharacteristically hesitant Subtly resistant (to the possession) A catalyst for tension
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Analytical curiosity tinged with mild frustration—Riker is in problem-solving mode, but Data’s glitch introduces an unpredictability that disrupts his usual confidence in the crew’s technical capabilities.

Riker stands with his hands clasped behind his back, a posture that suggests both readiness and deference to Picard’s authority. He reports the absence of life signs on the derelict ship with tactical precision, then immediately proposes modifying the scanners to penetrate the storms—a solution-oriented response typical of his leadership style. When he turns to Data for input, his expression is expectant, but Data’s stuttering causes a flicker of confusion to cross his face. Riker doesn’t interrupt or press further; instead, he lets the moment hang, deferring to Picard’s subsequent inquiry. The turbolift’s arrival interrupts his train of thought, leaving his strategic focus momentarily derailed.

Goals in this moment
  • Find a way to bypass the ion storms and confirm the presence of life signs on the derelict ship.
  • Support Data’s technical input while ensuring the crew’s investigative approach remains efficient and focused.
Active beliefs
  • The derelict ship’s silence is a puzzle that can be solved through technical innovation and teamwork.
  • Data’s expertise is critical to overcoming the obstacles posed by the ion storms, but his current behavior is an unexpected variable.
Character traits
Solution-oriented Deferential Observant Adaptive Tactical
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Heightened awareness with a sense of foreboding—Troi’s glance at Data is laced with concern, as if she’s picking up on an emotional signature that doesn’t belong to him. Her silence is not indifference but a calculated pause, giving her time to process what she’s sensing.

Troi stands slightly apart from the others, her empathic senses likely picking up on the subtle shifts in the room’s emotional energy. When Data stutters, her reaction is immediate but subtle: a quick, knowing glance in his direction. She doesn’t speak or intervene, but her body language—leaning slightly toward Data, her eyes narrowing—suggests she’s processing something deeper than the surface anomaly. Her silence is deliberate; she’s gathering information, perhaps sensing the Ux-Mal’s presence but not yet understanding its nature. The turbolift’s arrival doesn’t disrupt her focus; if anything, it heightens her awareness of the unresolved tension in the room.

Goals in this moment
  • Identify the source of the emotional disruption she’s detecting in Data, even if she can’t yet articulate it.
  • Prepare to intervene or alert the crew if the disruption escalates or poses a threat.
Active beliefs
  • Data’s stuttering is not a mere technical malfunction but a sign of something far more sinister, possibly tied to the derelict ship’s mysteries.
  • Her role as counselor requires her to remain vigilant for emotional anomalies that could impact the crew’s cohesion or safety.
Character traits
Empathically attuned Observant Reserved Intuitive Protective (of the crew)
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Objects Involved

Significant items in this scene

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Storm-Penetrating Scanners

The storm-penetrating scanners are the initial focus of the crew’s discussion, representing their tactical approach to uncovering the derelict ship’s secrets. Riker proposes modifying them to slice through the ion storms, framing them as a tool to bridge the gap between curiosity and confirmation. However, Data’s stuttering interrupts this line of thought, shifting the crew’s attention from the scanners to the android himself. The object’s role in the event is twofold: first, as a symbol of the crew’s problem-solving prowess, and second, as a red herring that distracts from the true threat—Data’s possession. By the time the turbolift arrives, the scanners have been rendered irrelevant, their potential overshadowed by the immediate crisis of Data’s condition.

Before: Functional and operational, though their effectiveness is limited …
After: Temporarily abandoned as a line of inquiry; the …
Before: Functional and operational, though their effectiveness is limited by the ion storms surrounding the derelict ship.
After: Temporarily abandoned as a line of inquiry; the crew’s focus shifts entirely to Data’s anomalous behavior, leaving the scanners’ modification unresolved.
Virtual Imaging Technology

Data’s mention of ‘virtual imaging technology’ as a potential solution to interpolate missing scanner data is cut short by his stuttering, turning the object from a proposed tool into a narrative afterthought. The technology symbolizes the crew’s reliance on innovation to overcome obstacles, but its introduction is abruptly derailed by the possession’s first visible sign. The virtual imaging tech remains untested and unexplored, its narrative potential left unrealized in this moment. Instead, it serves as a foil to Data’s glitch, highlighting how quickly the crew’s priorities can shift from external problems to internal crises. The turbolift’s arrival seals its irrelevance for now, leaving the technology’s fate—and the crew’s ability to use it—uncertain.

Before: A theoretical solution, not yet implemented or tested, …
After: Discarded as a priority; the crew’s attention is …
Before: A theoretical solution, not yet implemented or tested, but theoretically capable of addressing the scanner’s limitations.
After: Discarded as a priority; the crew’s attention is fully consumed by Data’s possession, rendering the technology’s potential moot for the time being.

Location Details

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Bridge Turbolift (Turbolift Four, USS Enterprise-D)

The turbolift serves as a pressure cooker for this event, its confined metal walls and humming ascent amplifying the tension as Data’s stuttering disrupts the crew’s discussion. The space is intimate yet impersonal—a liminal zone between decks where hierarchies blur slightly, and where the crew’s usual roles are momentarily suspended in the shared urgency of the moment. The turbolift’s arrival at its destination acts as a dramatic punctuation, cutting off the conversation and leaving the crew—and the audience—on the precipice of a revelation. Its functional role is to transport, but its narrative role is to contain the crew’s growing unease, forcing them to confront Data’s anomaly in real time.

Atmosphere Tense and claustrophobic, with a hum of machinery that underscores the crew’s unease. The confined …
Function A transitional space that becomes a crucible for revelation, where the crew’s focus shifts from …
Symbolism Represents the threshold between ignorance and awareness—the moment the crew crosses from treating the derelict …
Access Restricted to authorized personnel (senior staff and above); the turbolift’s destination deck (10) is implied …
The hiss of the turbolift doors opening and closing, framing the event’s beginning and end. The dim, functional lighting that casts long shadows, emphasizing the crew’s focused yet uneasy expressions. The steady hum of the turbolift’s mechanism, a low-frequency drone that mirrors the crew’s growing tension. The close proximity of the crew members, forcing them into physical proximity that heightens the emotional stakes.

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Key Dialogue

"PICARD: Did you find any evidence of life?"
"RIKER: No, but if Troi was right, we weren’t far away from it..."
"PICARD: Bridge. How do you suggest we proceed?"
"RIKER: We’re gonna have to find a way to modify the scanners to penetrate those storms. Got any ideas, Data...?"
"DATA: ((a beat)) It is p-p-possible we might be able to employ virtual imaging to interpolate missing data..."
"PICARD: Is there something wrong, Data?"